Leggy
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Post by Leggy on May 9, 2004 21:13:25 GMT
Ok, I've got LOTS of poems I want to submit, here's the first, a poem from Elrond's point of view about when Arwen died.
I lost my daughter
You wouldn't go to Valinor,
although I told you to,
Instead, I went to Valinor,
You stayed with Aragorn,
You became Queen,
Immortality you gave up,
When Gondor lost its King,
I lost my only daughter.
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Post by MirkwoodArcher on May 9, 2004 22:46:41 GMT
Another poet! That's great! I like this poem, post a lot more!
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Leggy
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Post by Leggy on May 10, 2004 3:04:26 GMT
Thank you Mirkwood Archer, by any chance do you remember legolasfanlotr?
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Post by MirkwoodArcher on May 10, 2004 5:50:56 GMT
Yes, I do. I wondered if it might be you! Welcome home!
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Leggy
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Post by Leggy on May 11, 2004 22:05:13 GMT
Yes it is me. I am here once again. I wasn't old enough last time, but this time I am!!!!!!!! ;D
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Post by Elessar on May 12, 2004 4:41:56 GMT
Nice to see you again Leggy!  I hope you'll post more of your poetry soon.  |
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Post by Marieke on May 12, 2004 22:23:14 GMT
Welcome back, Leggy! So that's what happened to you! Elessar, I just read your fanfiction, and I absolutely love it!  Please, post some more soon! |
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Leggy
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Post by Leggy on May 14, 2004 1:17:36 GMT
Yes that is what happened to me. Anyway, I have plenty of poetry that I write and I will post more periodically, I'm not a story writer though so only expect poems.  I love you all! |
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Post by MirkwoodArcher on May 14, 2004 16:42:44 GMT
Your poems are great.  |
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Leggy
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Post by Leggy on May 16, 2004 3:14:41 GMT
I've got a few more, ok, well more than a few, lol but here is one This poem is about my great-grandpa who died before I was born, enjoy! Never I never saw, there was no flaw, I never heard, but he wasn't a bird, I never felt, his cold black belt, I never will touch, but a great man he was such. I will never feel, but I know he was real, I will never see, a great man was he, I will never hear, this is what I fear.. Never. |
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Leggy
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Post by Leggy on May 16, 2004 3:15:46 GMT
and another:
Dreams
I could fly, I could soar,
Just open up that door.
I could sit, I could stand,
Just give me a hand.
I could write, I could read,
my brain's like a seed.
I could work, I could play,
I could listen, I could say,
I could.
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Post by Eruanwen on May 18, 2004 14:21:59 GMT
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Lessien
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Post by Lessien on Jul 24, 2004 16:21:57 GMT
Yay!!! Tis a discussion about Fanfic/Fan Poetry *ahem* Anywho.. I have a few large stories. At the moment, I'm finishing off the third part of a Trilogy, and I want to start posting them here.. but I'm not quite sure.. since its quite a long story lol... hmmm.. but in the meantime, I'll post two short story things I've made lol...
The Last Goodbye
Absence of life.
Slipping through the darkened tree's, face hidden beneath a silver veil of starlight. Sorrowful eyes stared ahead, barefeet caressing the ground, carrying away a deteriorating life.
Weeper's of loneliness.
Golden Nimloth's, towering Mallorn's. Sanctuary upon Cerin Amroth. Memories of Love, Memories of Pain, Memories of Happiness, Memories of Sadness.
The Last Goodbye.
Tears of sorrow touched pale skin, falling aimlessly at elemental touch. Crawling upon the soft grass, laying gently down. Arwen closed her eyes, pains of sorrow weeping within her as she gasped. A last image. A last thought. A last word, "Estel."
A last breath.
Half a Tear
Half a tear.
Half a drop.
A grain of crystal upon fair skin. Threads of golden hair delicately covering half a face. Scars raging hideously under flaxen streaks. The trauma left within her very blood.
Half a kiss.
Half a good-bye.
Lifting herself upon the golden decks, her gaze faltered. The mist curling around the ship as it set off, leaving behind a lingering absence.
Half an emotion.
Half a cry.
Arwen fell to the wooden decks weeping. Drops of circles appeared next to her hands as she wished not for departure of her mother. Elrond gazed soundlessly ahead, as his twin son's stood silently next to him.
Half a tear.
"Soon, we will be reunited upon the flawless lands, my beloved."
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Post by ArwenUndomiel on Jul 25, 2004 19:09:33 GMT
Wow everyone's writing is so good! |
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Post by Simbelmyne on Jul 26, 2004 9:38:29 GMT
Lessien, your writing really moves me...I love it. |
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I hope you'll post more of your poetry soon. 
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